I am really enjoying the point by point drafting exercise more than the blocking. I have begun to re draft my essay and feel much more confident in describing the roles using characteristics in this format. My intro still needs to be tweaked a bit.
Intro and thesis:
There are many important things that a teacher does for their
students, many hats they wear so to speak. These teachers spend their
free time planning lessons, and preparing themselves to make the best
for their students. Their jobs are very multifaceted. Teachers are our
guides through school, they help inspire our thoughts, and if they are
doing their jobs well the information sticks with us forever. In school,
from elementary through college the most important role played by our
teachers is advocate for the student, Mrs Gruwell and Mrs Watson have
represented this role throughout both movies.
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